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  1. #1
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    Red face No more

    I see you looking at me ...
    But i find it hard to belive ...
    You’re like a petal ,
    You’re like a thorn
    It cuts the metal like it’s a plastic toy ,

    I want you to stop coming into my mind
    Get the picture out, out of my life..

    Chorus:
    I can’t live like this no more ..
    Why are you haunting me? my soul?
    I can’t live like this no more
    I’m lost in hope , I’m lost in words..
    I wanna cry, For you my love..
    I’ll scream, if i have to I’ll die..
    I can’t live like this no more
    (Continue)
    Can i get you for a little more?
    I can’t live like this no more..

    i’m lost in thoughts, I’m lost in words ..
    When you’re near I just choke ,

    No words can come out
    So I sit in dead end silece..
    Get me out of my cage
    I’ll drink three bottles if I have a chance..

    Chorus:
    I can’t live like this no more
    Why are you haunting me? my soul?
    I can’t live like this no more
    I’m lost in hope , I’m lost in words..
    I wanna cry, For you my love..
    I’ll scream, if i have to I’ll die..
    I can’t live like this no more
    Can i get you for a little more?
    I can’t live like this no more..

    Burn it out into smoke,
    Eat my heart like it’s a joke
    I DON’T CARE
    I DON’T MIND
    All I know is I’m still down
    Burn it out, eat it down
    I don’ tcare
    I don’t mind it..

    Chorus:
    I can’t live like this no more
    Why are you haunting me? my soul?
    I can’t live like this no more
    I’m lost in hope , I’m lost in words..
    I wanna cry, For you my love..
    I’ll scream, if i have to I’ll die..
    I can’t live like this no more
    Can i get you for a little more?
    I can’t live like this no more..

    No more..Just can’t can’t live like this no more..

  2. #2
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    Don't look at (continue)...it doesn't go away) enjoy)

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    I liekd your other works more. Without the appropriate rhythm it just doens't rhyme and or ride so smooth. In addiction 'Plastic toy' didn't match me... but most likely for similar reasons. I would have went with something more rippable, like paper or wax.
    Nothing proves Atheism. It just gives me a reason to prove you wrong

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