Thread: Fly away

So hard to think,
So hard to breath,
I'd like to be a little free ...
Get my mind going like the wind
To fly away and play with leaves,
I wanna be this wind ,
I wanna try and breath ,
I wanna brake my heart
And fly away..
My time to shine..

I wanna shine,
I wanna fly
Don't wanna cry ,
(Continue)
Don't wanna hide,
I wanna feel
I wanna breath
Just let me go,
Oh please, Just please..

Chorus:
Let me fly away
I'll be a friend to the rain ,
Let me kiss your lips
You wouldn't know it was me ..
I wanna be free
From some thoughts in my head,
Let me fly away
With the wind today..

No more mistakes ,
No more hope in my head ...
There's no place
To be in love today ...
Just wanna stop ,
Just wanna fly away ,
I'll be the wind
Will you be the rain?

I wanna shine,
I wanna fly
Don't wanna cry ,
Don't wanna hide,
I wanna feel
I wanna breath
Just let me go,
Oh please, Just please..


Chorus:
Let me fly away
I'll be a friend to the rain
Let me kiss your lips
You wouldn't know it was me
I wanna be free
From some thoughts in my head,
Let me fly away
With the wind today..

It's as magical as I want it to be
It doesn't happen but I still belive..
I'll kiss, You wouldn't understand
What I feel makes me fly... away..

I wanna shine,
I wanna fly
Don't wanna cry ,
Don't wanna hide,
I wanna feel
I wanna breath
Just let me go,
Oh please, Just please..

Chorus:
Let me fly away
I'll be a friend to the rain,
Let me kiss your lips
You wouldn't know it was me ...
I wanna be free
From some thoughts in my head,
Let me fly away
With the wind today..

Let me fly..Let me fly away
From some thoughts in my head
Let me fly, Let me fly

Many good and inspiring lines, and themes. but over all I'd try to re-shoot. sorry.
Play the leaves. loved it. but some imagery is bland if you know what i mean.