Thread: My rude attitude (Strong Language Warning)

Now I don´t care what people say about a way of my life
I was trying to live by their rules but they brought me to a fight
I´m tired of all fucking assholes who are convinced they are right
I can´t stand more motherfuckers who promise me paradise

Bridge 1:
Don´t show me your face!
The thing I want to hit
I´m not the right one
who´s eating your shit!

Chorus:
This is my life I´ll enjoy it well
No servant in heaven but king in hell
Live for today not afraid of fall
I´ll do what I like and fuck ´em all!

You´re trying to change my way of life about you think it´s wrong
Don´t you see frustration in me that overwhelming me so strong

Bridge 2:
Don´t show me your face!
The thing I want to hit
I´m not the right one
who´s eating your shit!
Your bloody shit!!

Chorus:

I don´t hear your bloody words that are telling me to stop
I´m gonna do what I like to do and make it up to the top

Bridge 3:
Don´t show me your face!
The thing I want to hit
I´m not the right one
who´s eating your shit!
Your fucking shit!!!

Chorus:

Lol. I can remember lying in bed singing stuff liek that to myself. interesting and deep.
I'll I want to know now is hat kind of a person you are and what you stand for.
... also if you have a beat fro that song. I can sing backup.

Warning or no, that language is simply gratuitous. There's nothing clever about it; it has no redeeming features whatsoever.

Thank you for your opinion. I´m glad you like it.
I am very placid person. I tried to be good with everyone. But at one point I´ve realized that some people force you their truth no matter what is your point of view. These lyrics helped me when I was feeling very down depressed and angry. When everybody told me „you can´t do this you shouldn´t do that“. So I screamed my angry out in these lyrics!

I wrote it like fast heavy metal song or punk song with angry screaming voice!

I am very placid person. I tried to be good with everyone. But at one point I´ve realized that some people force you their truth no matter what is your point of view. These lyrics helped me when I was feeling very down depressed and angry. When everybody told me „you can´t do this you shouldn´t do that“. So I screamed my angry out in these lyrics!

That´s why there is strong language. I´m sorry for taking offense to someone. But I don´t agree with you that it´s gratuitous. You can´t write softly when you´re screaming your angry out!

I am not certain but your constructions sometimes lead me to think that English is not your first language, for example,"say about a way of my life" should normally read "about my way of life" and you would be "brought to a fight"

Yes. You´ re right. English isn´t my first language. I´m from Czech republic (Europe).
Thank you for your advice about my mistakes.
„brought to a fight“ I will change, but „say about a way of my life“ to "about my way of life“ it doesn´t fit into vocal melody line.