Thread: Goin down

My heart wants only you,
Doesn't see anyone too,
I'm like a cinderella
But I lost the second shoe,
My heart beats for you
No medicine is good,
Put me in a white room
I'll sing it all, for whom, you now..

I didn't know I was in love
I'm goin' straight to hell
So I would burn my heart out..
I'm goin' down down
Into the ground,
I hate the feelings that I have
(Continue)
I wanna burn them down..
I'm goin' down, down
Into the ground...

My heart begs for your attention,
I'll jump off a cliff If I have too..
My heart wants you,
My head wants to rest too,
It's all a something,
There's no cure for
This state of my mind..

I didn't know I was in love
I'm goin' straight to hell
So I would burn my heart out..
I'm goin' down down
Into the ground,
I hate the feelings that I have
I wanna burn them down..
I'm goin' down, down
Into the ground...

If I get a painkiller it will hurt much more,
If I get some drugs too I'll want you more,
There's no escape
I won't cope with this pain,
Stop me if you can
Coz I'm goin' straight to hell...

I didn't know I was in love
I'm goin' straight to hell
So I would burn my heart out..
I'm goin' down down
Into the ground,
I hate the feelings that I have
I wanna burn them down..
I'm goin' down, down
Into the ground...

Down down
Down into the ground..

Into the ground...

Doesn't see anyone too - I'd change to doesn't see any two
But decent.. I'd ahve to hear it fro you though to say more. Aha, I have no rythm for reading other peoples works.
That being said. I would rewrite these lines like so. Prove me wrong please.
I didn't know I was in love - - - - I didn't know!- I was in love!
I'm goin' straight to hell - - - - I'm goiing down..
- - - - - - - - - - - Straight to hell
And I hate the feelings that I have. Unless it lyrically fits. finish the line better..

If I get a painkiller it will hurt much more,
If I get some drugs too I'll want you more, - 1 of my fav verses. I can relate.