Thread: Only in my dreams

Hi' I'm a first time poster here trying to weed through some of my old lyrics so that I can start getting some music to some of them with a friend of mine - So hope to become a regular poster here! This one is unfinished but really stood out for me so some specific critiques on interesting directions to take the end of the song in would be appreciated, as the first few versus seem a bit samey. Thanks in advance!!

"Your forcing me into my bed,
Chained to my pillow,
An elephant on display,

Your making me overfed,
Just a freak in a show,
A needle in the hay,

These steel quilts just won't shed,
No way to say hello,
no words left to say"

There's some good wording in here. I'd imagine after these three verses that you'd have a chorus. Although you don't have to, it stands out much better if you do. Plus you could use the title in the chorus, making it more recognisable for when people read or hear it.
For specifics on what direction to go after these verses... I'd say just sum it up at the end of what point you're trying to get across here. I can't be too much help. I'm pretty tired just now but thought I'd give some critique anyways.