Thread: Sweet innocence

I´m just a shadow of a child I used to be
All beatiful inside´s been broken by years

Everyday there was something new to see and learn
Time after time all unknowledges were burnt

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When has it happened
Who is to blame
The change shattered
With all my life and broke my game

I used to live in my free world with no cares
Of the god called money that rules everywhere

I´ve never really thought that my soul could bleed
That I would ever meet with all lies and greed

Bridge:

Chorus:
I don´t wanna be
I don´t wanna be an adult since now
I don´t wanna see
I don´t wanna see the world goes down

Indifference and selfishness I had to fight
Obey work pay die is life with we all satisfied

Bridge:

Chorus:
I don´t wanna lose
I don´t wanna lose sweet innocence
I don´t wanna feel
I don´t wanna feel blood of childhood on my hands

I liked it but I would change "Of the god called money that rules everywhere" to "of the God called money that rules the world"... "with all lies and greed" needs some kind of article like "with all my (the) lies and greed"

Thank you for your advice. "God called money that rules the world" sounds great. About "with all my (the) lies and greed" I´ll think. Maybe "meet with lies hate and greed"