Thread: Don't You Ever Dream

"Don't You Ever Dream"


I'm the pain you see
In your blue eyes
I'm the vain you feel
On your cut ties

And I'm the power
In your blood flow
And I'm the weakness
On your room floor

Don't you ever dream

(Chorus)
You can't see me
I'm in disguise
You can't feel me
I'm in surprise

I'm the garden grass
In your backyard
I'm the test of strength
In your red heart

And I'm the honor
In your window
And I'm the shameless
On your pillow

Don't you ever dream

(Chorus)
You can't see me
I'm in disguise
You can't feel me
I'm in surprise

Don't you ever dream

Hey, I really like this one, especially the line "And I'm the shameless, On your pillow". That's a really good line. Not sure who the syllables fit with the melody, but the line "And I'm the weakness, On your room floor" might have a bit more impact if it was I am the weakness, On your bedroom floor. Makes the weakness hit home a bit harder. Depends on the conext you meant it though. Dont know what you've got music wise for this, but it screams something at half pace with quite heavy but slow drums (maybe a syncopated beat) and a sense of impending doom (maybe from keyboards) behind clean picked guitar. Just a thought!

Paul