Thread: Before Reality

This is a short song that I've written about a girl I knew. I wrote it this morning, and am currently working on the music for it, I thought about adding more to it, but honestly I think the lyrics are fine the way they are, but I'd like to hear what you guys have to say. After the chorus at the end, it kinda breaks off into a a long series of chords with some minor fretwork afterwards and then fades off. I'd post the music, but I don't have the tools to do it, and currently it's more in my head than anything.


Section 1

You were a cute girl,
wide eyed and sweet,
our chemisty
inspired those we'd meet,
I was happy,
with our brief time,
You helped me, lifted me from the grime.

Chorus

Reality.....before it, I was pleased.
Reality.....if it wasn't for it, I'd have what I need.


Section 2

It's ok though, I don't regret,
a single thing,
I'm glad we met,
and it was worth it,
kissing you,
was something special too.

Chorus/End of Lyrics
Reality.....before it, I was pleased.
Reality.....if it wasn't for it, I'd have what I need.