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    Come To You

    This sat in a drawer for over twenty years, and tonight I suddenly added the four missing lines and finished it off.


    COME TO YOU
    by LintonRobinson

    Copyright 1984 Wenatchee Girl Music

    When the time has come
    And not a heartbeat before
    When I have it all ready and accounted for
    When there's a change in the weather
    And a turn of the tide
    And I've got it all together
    And can throw it all aside
    When the time has gone
    And there's nothing in store
    And I find out I just can't take it no more
    I will come to you
    And then you will know
    I'll come in like the winter
    Like the blue eyes of snow
    When I come to you
    There'll be nowhere to hide
    I will come like the fever
    I will come without pride
    I will come for you
    I will come to you
    When the pain is gone
    And there's nothing to say
    And I guess we never would have made it anyway
    When a life’s worth of wonder
    Has spilled over the dam
    And my heart gets pulled under
    By everything that I am
    When my doubts are gone
    And the devil's to pay
    And I can't do without you even one more day
    I will come for you
    I will come for it all
    I'll come like breaking of waves, girl
    I'll come right over your wall
    When I come for you
    I won't have to explain
    I will come like the thunder
    Like the chill touch of rain
    When I come for you, when I come for you
    When the moon is full
    And the sun burns through
    And I've figured out exactly what I'm gonna do
    When these words are all spoken
    And these things are all done
    And all the promises broken
    But the very last one
    When I wake up and dream
    When I come out of the blue
    When I get a certain feeling that I've got to have you
    I will come for you
    I will come for your life
    Let me in but look out, girl
    You know I cut like a knife
    I will come for you
    Like a spark down a wire
    And you'd better be ready
    You know I burn like a fire
    I will come to you
    I will come to you
    I will come to you

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    20 years in the making, wow. I have a couple like that. Still waiting for that chorus or that bridge or whatever. This is a pretty good piece in that tough-love sort of fashion. Would make a nice little hardrock ditty.


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    I thought it was quiet beautiful......
    Salvation from our enemies and from the hand of all who hate us-


    Nails did not keep our Savior on the cross, love did.
    Can I get an amen...

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    Nice piece.....Has a nice tone and over all feel to it.. Kinda funny you forgot about for so long but regardless you did finish and very nicely I might add. Much enjoyed... I heard a nice little melody going the moment I started readying and then I sang to hear it better.... Sings very well too....

    Fondly,
    Miriam

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    Gonna send me a recording?


    thanks for your comments.

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