Thread: Forgotten

Sweet relief from the smile you hide
Little laugh trying to make me find
All the answers behind your face
But I find it hard look for them

Empty glass from the beer I drink
Talk to you, it really makes me think
About how long we've know each other
But do you even like me the way I...

(Chorus)
So this is what's right
And this is your sight
About how I am
And who i'll be

Dunking me under from the pool i'm in
God help me if I dare try to swim
To the ocean shore of where I belong
But will I ever get there before you leave

Kick me harder under your reddish hair
Make me nervous, yeah you make me swear
In my head from the smile you please
Take my jigsaw and fix it for life

(Chorus)
So this is what's right
And this is your sight
About how I am
And who i'll be

(Chorus)
So this is what's right
And this is your sight
About how I am
And who i'll be

The forgotten one
Always tries to run
To a very dark room
And a hard cold cry

Nice piece in all Patrick.... I hear a new tone or voice her form your other pieces.... I could hear the melody. The meter needs to be addressed a bit though.....

Fondly,
Miriam