Thread: Red Shifting

Thanks for the comment, yeah reading it like a poem is fine to me (although it'd be a really shitty poem to be honest). And no, there is no hook in the lyrics themselves. I'm pretty crap at writing hooks and they always feel tacky to me, so I don't try. Either it'll happen when I transfer it to song, or it doesn't need it anyway. But thanks again.

Yeah this to me is more liek a poem than a song. Still very good though.

Yes it could work as a song.