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Old 06-21-2009, 12:28 PM   #1
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Everything I Wanted to Say

I'll be blunt: I am heartbroken right now. So that is what this song is about. I will have music up before Friday, so those of you that would like to hear it can listen.

Everything I Wanted to Say

You, I know
I know you’re awake,
lighting up
your own world of hate.
And here I am still waiting
in the midst of all your hating.
You can’t push me away,
and I tell myself you don’t want this,
but the pain’s too much today.

Take it all in:
my tears tell you I love you.
And sure,
I’m not breathin’,
but I’m not alone,
am I? Am I?

You,
you close your eyes,
but there’s no silence there,
not tonight.
God willing, you will find me
and all that you couldn’t see.
Please don’t shut me away.
I can’t tell myself you don’t want me.
I’m clutching to yesterday.

Take it all in:
you can say you don’t love me.
And sure,
I won’t believe it,
but I’m not alone,
am I? Am I?

Don’t fall asleep,
not without me.
You pretend you’re not dying,
but we both know that you’re lying.

Tell me
Honey, why can’t I just love you?
And sure,
it’s not what you want to see,
but you’re not alone
anymore.
Am I?
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Old 06-21-2009, 02:29 PM   #2
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I think some of those lyrics are really good. I love how say Am I, repetitive. It sounds cathcy and i would like to her it please.
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Old 06-22-2009, 02:24 PM   #3
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this is real good yu have talent ad realy like to hear this
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