Tom

Simplicities a thing of the past,
It’s too confusing to have a blast,
Life wound upon another’s finger,
As they wait to pull the trigger,

Find a penance, something to clinch,
Paranoia, depression, suddenly it hits,
Your very own man-made hole,
Taking your very own man-made soul,

I’ll never enjoy your own bitter kiss,
Taste the lies and the revenge on your lips,
I’ll never enjoy watching you cheat and take,
As you realise just how much you hate,
Your very own Man-made mistake,

Sometimes my anger takes over me,
I want control; I want to be free,
Like ice in the middle of the winter,
Once it’s through there’s nothing you can do,

Excuse me please, I do regret to say,
You’ll be here and gone within a day,
You and you man-made devices will fail,
But to no prevail…

I’ll never enjoy your own bitter kiss,
Taste the lies and the revenge on your lips,
I’ll never enjoy watching you cheat and take,
As you realise just how much you hate,
Your very own Man-made mistake,

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moderan

Hmm. I like this though it leaves me with some questions. To wit...what is the mistake, and why the emphasis on man-made? I think that needs to be spelled out. The first word should be simplicity's, and I think you mean ...to no avail.
The opening lines make me think a shooting is about to or has just taken place...and that the man-made mistake is a gun. But then that's simple

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