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10-09-2005, 07:08 AM
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Best Seller
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Sunrise. Sunday Morning.
Mars is being chased across the sky by Orion; I'm going for a walk this morning and have a good long look.
4:07 a.m.
j.jd.
Last edited by johnjohndoe : 10-09-2005 at 07:15 AM.
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10-09-2005, 07:18 AM
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: Jan 2005
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You have such a sincere romantic streak in you.
I love early morning walks. Except fro me it is normally to the train station to commute to work!
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10-09-2005, 08:01 AM
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Wordsmith
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: *sigh* in dublin (like a sane person)
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well i cant hav eearly morning walks cos on weekends i generally get up in the afternoon.
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10-09-2005, 12:13 PM
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Best Seller
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this morning.
I watched the sun
steal the stars from the sky this morning.
They disappeared slowly, one by one,
until the sun's light washed away the darkness.
So I went inside,
brewed some coffee and wrote this down.
Last edited by johnjohndoe : 10-09-2005 at 02:02 PM.
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10-09-2005, 12:38 PM
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: Jun 2004
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I just woke up
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10-09-2005, 02:52 PM
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what a beautiful, beautiful poem. the sunrise stealing the stars... i've always been a sunset sort of girl, myself, J.JD. It's nice to be able to see the sunrise through your eyes.
vodka
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10-09-2005, 06:20 PM
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Best Seller
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dear ms. vodka,
thank you for your kind comment. as you can see, i've followed your suggestion by posting s.sm. here occasionally.
john.
p.s.
interesting new avatar.
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10-09-2005, 07:54 PM
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Penguin-in-Chief
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The poet's season is upon us.
Dying stars and falling leaves. Are we not blessed?
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10-10-2005, 12:37 AM
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Writing Machine
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There's poet season?  |
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10-10-2005, 02:23 AM
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Mentor
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Originally Posted by starrwriter
It begins right after deer season ends. I'm getting ready to lock and load. I have a space reserved on my wall for a stuffed poet's head. They come pre-stuffed.
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Damn. You stole my line.
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