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| Literary Maneuvers "Fortnightly" write-offs, competition, feedback 'n' fun. |
02-26-2006, 05:58 PM
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Profound Writer
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But silverwriter's work also isn't about valentines day... (not that I didn't like it, I loved it!)
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02-26-2006, 06:03 PM
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Wordsmith
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actually, it is...
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"Just remember, wherever you are, that's what time it is." - eggo
"I write in bed. Afterwards, I offer my laptop a cigarette." - Jolly McJollyson
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02-26-2006, 06:22 PM
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Profound Writer
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Ok, here is my entry. I realise it doesn't have to do anything about Valentines Day, but I was in times need and just finished it. I would like to relook it tomorrow, but of course, the deadline is today, so excuse me if there is some obvious mistake I missed, it's probably due to the time I had to make this and that it's passed midnight here.
I still of course loved to write it, as since LM is one of the only things that actually motivates me.
How love is an atom
Ah, the atom, omnipotent and supreme.
A comparison for love, so it does seem.
Its sterling name, indissoluble in Greek,
just like amour, everlasting, never weak.
In its middlemost, a strong nucleus core,
solid as loves persistence, surely not more.
That encircled by auroral electrons,
which are the energetic sparks, for the nonce.
But I now know, science and love were amiss.
Neither correct, now to learn what really is:
The name deceitful, atoms can seize to be,
like devotion will not stay eternally.
The resolute midpoint existing of parts,
as attraction, always involves plural hearts.
And those leptons ‘of stream’ hovering over,
are just a ‘negative energy’-thrower. |
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02-26-2006, 06:23 PM
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Originally Posted by silverwriter
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actually, it is...
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't Was my final hope  Oh well, I at least wrote something, that's an accomplishment, I'm sure Jen, my e-mommy, will be proud. |
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02-26-2006, 06:36 PM
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Wordsmith
Join Date: Aug 2004
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your sig is so amusing
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"Just remember, wherever you are, that's what time it is." - eggo
"I write in bed. Afterwards, I offer my laptop a cigarette." - Jolly McJollyson
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02-27-2006, 03:02 AM
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Ink Slinger
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Submissions are now closed. Thanks to everyone who submitted something. I should have the scores by next Monday.
If anyone wants to judge, you are still welcome to. Just PM me and I'll give you the detailed instructions, which aren't really that detailed.
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