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Literary Maneuvers "Fortnightly" write-offs, competition, feedback 'n' fun.

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Old 11-19-2005, 09:44 PM   #16
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Refrigerated Nights

It was much a night like this

When the darkness wrapped around me in cool comfort

The time clock nattered away

Waiting for its oak tag deposit

I started my job, with much the same aplomb,

The way I often do

The morgue was cool and cautious place

The smell of antiseptic battling the smell of death.

When they brought in the latest victim

She had auburn hair

That lie on the gurney, spread about in casual beauty.

After signing, they left her to me.

Slot twelve was opened

Or perhaps number five

Never the type of choices

For those not alive.

I saw, for a moment, impossible

Movement.

Her hand clenched in response to the pain

Her eyes moving beneath the lids.

I had to move quickly, to save what was right.

I grabbed the book end from the table

And smashed her head in.

She was dead after all.
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