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| Literary Maneuvers "Fortnightly" write-offs, competition, feedback 'n' fun. |
06-20-2005, 07:11 PM
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Superb effort from all the reviewers Pawn you got it in one it matters not.
I have to say once again tremendous amount of work and effort in the responses to all the poems
Excellent a credit to this forum
G
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06-20-2005, 07:14 PM
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On second reading Aevin I think the 8 was harsh
Spelling is allways a problem if you want it to be
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06-21-2005, 12:43 AM
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hey Ilan, you wanna try my second place recliner?
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06-21-2005, 01:05 AM
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Wordsmith
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Mmm... recliners...
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06-21-2005, 04:26 AM
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I received the wooden stool of the mediocre. I sit in the corner and wear a connical hat. Wanna trade?
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A minifridge... The doll house of the alcoholic.
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06-21-2005, 11:10 AM
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Well... I would, but... 
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06-21-2005, 11:18 AM
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Ilan
you get my vote for most appropriate use of the best chosen emoticon. I've still got a silly grin! =D> =D> =D>
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*He can compress the most words into the smallest idea of any man I know - Abraham Lincoln
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06-21-2005, 12:52 PM
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Those happy clappy type things must have practised for hours to achieve such symmetry!
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06-21-2005, 02:34 PM
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Originally Posted by gordon
On second reading Aevin I think the 8 was harsh
Spelling is allways a problem if you want it to be
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Anyone who gets a low score is likely to think it's undeserved. I stand by the scores I awarded, though I don't plan to justify them at all except through PMs. If you want more information, feel free to contact me privately.
On a side note, I find it ironic that so many have said my reviews usually aren't harsh enough and give an unrealistically pleasant picture of works, yet I've apparently scored more harshly than any other person. *shrugs* I think a greater scoring range prevents having too many ties.
One more thing ... I've talked with Pawn, and we've already got a second LM theme in the works. I'm just waiting to hear back from him on when would be the best time to start it.
--Aevin
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06-21-2005, 04:12 PM
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I can hardly wait.
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06-21-2005, 05:27 PM
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thanks for all the reviews, i would have replied sooner but i was in paris for a week, it was crappy i might add, i nearly melted it was so hot!
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06-21-2005, 09:37 PM
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You poor thing, spending a week in Paris.
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06-22-2005, 11:26 AM
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hehe, it was bad though, so many museums, so much crappy art (one of the pictures was a smartie stuck to a page) and i got sick
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06-22-2005, 11:53 AM
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Wow, those are thoughtful reviews. Thanks for all the work you guys did.
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06-22-2005, 11:12 PM
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Man, when's the next one?? I'm itching to get into this. Fortnightly...does that mean next monday is up?
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