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| Literary Maneuvers "Fortnightly" write-offs, competition, feedback 'n' fun. |
05-31-2005, 09:07 AM
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Profound Writer
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Ontari-ari-ari-o
Gender: Female
Posts: 1,267
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Full of joyful pain
After midnight baptism
Emergence of life.
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A man's subconscious self is not the ideal companion. It lurks for the greater part of his life in some dark den of its own, hidden away, and emerges only to taunt and deride and increase the misery of a miserable hour.
P. G. Wodehouse, Uneasy Money
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05-31-2005, 10:48 AM
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#17
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Profound Writer
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Behind you.
Posts: 1,065
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Should have looked both ways
Before crossing that damn street,
My spirit grumbles
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Once upon a time in the future ....
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05-31-2005, 10:07 PM
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#18
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Best Seller
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Just North of Boston
Gender: Male
Posts: 561
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The Last Party
bottles glitter crumbs
daylight reveals hidden stains
who's that on the couch
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05-31-2005, 10:17 PM
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#19
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: Canada
Gender: Male
Posts: 3,849
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After What?
morning after what
you should make yourself more clear
when speaking of sex
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A minifridge... The doll house of the alcoholic.
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06-01-2005, 10:23 PM
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#20
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Prolific Writer
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Newfoundland, Canada
Posts: 204
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I and I
Of Short petal fall,
Day in out night solipsism,
Some who side by side.
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No thing happens at random but all things as a result of a reason and by necessity.
(Aetius 1.25.4=67B2)
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06-02-2005, 01:05 PM
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#21
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Member
Join Date: May 2005
Posts: 18
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its 10 in morning
the greenish vomit on me
made me puke again.
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Cogito, ergo sum.
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06-02-2005, 09:22 PM
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#22
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Canuckistan
Gender: Female
Posts: 3,326
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Not Again
Not Again
Eyes open -- questions
freezing my brain melt to tears.
I swallow dryly
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"I wanted to work in either Miami or L.A. After Canada, I wanted warm weather."
-- Jillian Barbarie
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06-02-2005, 10:06 PM
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#23
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I am still alive.
Sun, a white hot coat hanger
dragged across my eyes.
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06-02-2005, 10:13 PM
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#24
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Canuckistan
Gender: Female
Posts: 3,326
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[ot:68d2be6785]
Quote:
Sun, a white hot coat hanger
dragged across my eyes.
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I felt the pain in my eyes as I read it -- ouch! [/ot:68d2be6785]
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"I wanted to work in either Miami or L.A. After Canada, I wanted warm weather."
-- Jillian Barbarie
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06-03-2005, 04:54 AM
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#25
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Adept Writer
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: England
Gender: Male
Posts: 822
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Trapped
Trapped
Sick spinning ceiling
What limitted horizon
Is before my eyes
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06-04-2005, 07:20 PM
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#26
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Prolific Writer
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: Montana
Posts: 211
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"Attack of the 1000-foot Mushrooms"
Within dark concrete
The seed of man lies waiting
Heat echoes through bone...
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"You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you." - Ray Bradbury
Ellipses are my minions, they... do my bidding, mwahahahha!
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06-04-2005, 09:22 PM
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#27
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Best Seller
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Adrian, Michigan
Posts: 719
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Constant rotation
True, real, constant rotation
I long for more rum
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"I cannot fiddle, but I can make a great state of a small city." -Themistocles
"Conrad transcended all the rules. There have been, perhaps, greater novelists, but I believe that he was incomparably the greatest artist who ever wrote a novel." -H.L. Mencken
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06-07-2005, 09:47 AM
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#28
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Gender: Male
Posts: 4,549
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A Hard Night's Day
World's edge now recedes
Squeezing pressure builds and pounds
Awareness; Headache!
mod note: Journyman has indicated that he would like this post to be considered his entry. - DM
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*He has never been known to use a word that might send a reader to the dictionary - William Faulkner (about Ernest Hemingway) 
*Poor Faulkner. Does he really think big emotions come from big words? - Ernest Hemingway (about William Faulkner)
*Thank you for sending me a copy of your book; I'll waste no time reading it - Moses Hadas
*He can compress the most words into the smallest idea of any man I know - Abraham Lincoln
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06-07-2005, 03:08 PM
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#29
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Profound Writer
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Northern Colorado
Posts: 1,052
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DWAI
Out on my O R
Now to scrape up two C notes
And get my truck back
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Parsley, Sage, Rosemary, and Ronald
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06-07-2005, 04:39 PM
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#30
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Scribe
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: England
Posts: 73
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I feel like a king
Yet look like a bloody fool
Oh I love drinking
(Night before the hangover  ) <--- My entry ---
Why does my head hurt
Oh my gosh look at my foot
Let me sleep again
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