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I've entered every recent LM competition, but I've really never given it more attention that a five minute write-up, and it has showed. Well, I hope to redeem myself with this story. It's right up to the wire: 499 words. I put some decent consideration into it this time, and didn't just write off the top of my head. Enjoy!
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Mother Gady
By Edwin Ramses
"Surely, this year it will come." old mama Gady whispered to her children as she slowly rocked back and forth on the wooden chair. The children talked amongst themselves, whispering with excitement now that the Christmas season had come. Once again, she spoke, to no one in particular: "It has come every year, children. It won't fail us, the snow..."
All the children had seen it, had felt the feathery fluff between their fingers. The older ones even remembered their first snowman, and they huddled around momma Gady, telling each other stories of the outside world. One child, one of the eldest, snuck out of the room, tiptoeing softly on the metallic carpet. He pushed the door open and walked outside, into the plaza.
Mama Gady's house bordered the plaza where the merchants hawked their wares; the kid walked along, looking at the stalls, and his hands shoved in his pockets.
"Global warming..."
"We can make snow!"
"Chipmunk flavored ramen, here!"
The voices of the crowd blended in as he walked, his face twisted in worry. He looked up at the sky, wondering if the snow would actually return this year. "Hmph!" He slammed his fist against a metal pole, covered in the tar that had accumulated throughout the year. Somebody tapped him on the shoulder.
"Sady..." He said when he saw her. She smiled that great toothy grin of hers.
"What, no hug, Damien?" She teased, smacking him on the lips. "How's mama Gady doing?"
The two walked along the stalls, occasionally looking at the TVs and expensive wares for sale. "Not too good. She's growing senile..." Sady nestled against Damien’s shoulder, reveling in his warmth. "I just wish the snow would come... It should have been here month's ago, and now, December’s almost over..."
Damien stopped, his hands balled into fists. Salty tears washed down his cheeks. "I just want her to have the snow... one last time..." Sady looked at him, and felt for him. She wanted to say something, anything, to cheer him up... but alas...
"Damien... do not worry. It's like the good book says," She lifted up his face so that he could see her, "without hope, we have nothing! The snow will come. I just know it will, before mama Gady passes away." Damien smiled, and kissed her.
"Thank you. Sady." The two walked together for the rest of the day, and when they came home, Damien rushed into mama Gady's room. "Momma! I brought you some...food..."
He walked up to her, where in the room she lay in her rocking chair. The children lay around, sleeping and dreaming dreams of snow, but Damien saw his mother and placed the food on the table. He wept, and sady stood by the door, not knowing how to comfort him. The boy placed his fingers to his mother's eyes, glassy and dead, and pressed them closed. He turned to sady,
"She's dead." he mumbled, his voice stretched tight, "My momma, she's dead."
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