It's peculiar how I can spot all the mistakes in my own post only after I have posted it. C'est la vie.
*Evil chuckle* Have I got a great story for the Shoes...
It's peculiar how I can spot all the mistakes in my own post only after I have posted it. C'est la vie.
*Evil chuckle* Have I got a great story for the Shoes...
The Dark Art Of Posting. A useful thread!
http://www.writingforums.com/writers...t-posting.html
I have a wooden spoon and I'm not afraid to use it.
Still looking for two judges! Any takers? Would quite like to give bazz a break.
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I would love to judge, I just have a feeling everyone would all tie with perfect scores! I just am not good at giving criticism, sorry Bazz.
"Don't you understand anything that's going on?
Buttercup shook her head.
Westley shook his too. "You never have been the brightest, I guess."
"Do you love me, Westley? Is that it?"
He couldn't believe it. "Do I love you? My God, if your love were a grain of sand, mine would be a universe of beaches! If your love were -"
"I don't understand that first one yet," Buttercup interrupted. She was starting to get very excited now. "Let me get this straight. Are you saying my love is a grain of sand and yours is this other thing? Images confuse me so - is this universal business of yours bigger than my sand? Help me, Westley. I have the feeling we're on the verge of something just terribly important."
-Princess Bride.
I'll judge.
Everything I know about writing I learned from my golden retriever;
1. Try to do everything with class
2. Always be honest, even when it will get you into trouble
3. Play, play, play
4. Nap frequently
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Sure I can't tempt you Sunny? I'm sure you would be great!
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I'll do it in the future. I'll just pay attention to how everyone is being critiqued this time around. I'm not sure I understand the "laws" of writing enough myself, to tell others how I thought they did it right or wrong. I hope you forgive me. ;0)
"Don't you understand anything that's going on?
Buttercup shook her head.
Westley shook his too. "You never have been the brightest, I guess."
"Do you love me, Westley? Is that it?"
He couldn't believe it. "Do I love you? My God, if your love were a grain of sand, mine would be a universe of beaches! If your love were -"
"I don't understand that first one yet," Buttercup interrupted. She was starting to get very excited now. "Let me get this straight. Are you saying my love is a grain of sand and yours is this other thing? Images confuse me so - is this universal business of yours bigger than my sand? Help me, Westley. I have the feeling we're on the verge of something just terribly important."
-Princess Bride.
I'll judge again.
But I'm also going to enter, since it was my prompt idea originally... So take that! Hoowah!
That means I can judge my own entry and give it a score of .. ONE MILLION.
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Looks like all the judges' seats are taken, which means I may just have to write a story for this one...
Question: When's the competition thread going to be set up?
Whoops. Obviously, I haphazardly didn't read that. Have to update myself often. XD
Just a reminder for all: The comps (while I'm organising them at least) will start on the 1st of every month from now on. This gives us two weeks to get the stories in, and another two weeks to get the scores in and decide on a new prompt.
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I will judge and so maybe I can learn to get better to help people.
Fin, Babayaga, Terry D and Kyle are judging. Thank you for your kind offer Mr mitchell but we have the judges this time round. I will be more than happy to make use of you next month if you're still interested!
The theme for the next comp is "Shoes hanging on a wire" and the comp will go live on the 1st. Thank you all for your tremendous help in this!
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Just a observation, but why not let Mitchell judge. So Kyle can write for his prompt. Unless he just wants to judge.
Yeah, I sent Mitchell a PM earlier asking if he wanted to switch places with me. The offer can be made by Kyle instead if he wants.
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