Thread: Three new haikus

No need to get into the 5-7-5 thing as it's a very deliberate choice by me, not to work with. All other thoughts are very welcome. The pieces are not related to each other.




hummingbirds
like dragonflies
like helicopters

~~~

one little fly
a meditation hall full
of disturbances

~~~

high waters
high moon
reaching for each other

I like the first haiku because the syllables are 3-4-5. This could be new type of haiku type poetry.