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    Three new haikus

    No need to get into the 5-7-5 thing as it's a very deliberate choice by me, not to work with. All other thoughts are very welcome. The pieces are not related to each other.




    hummingbirds
    like dragonflies
    like helicopters

    ~~~

    one little fly
    a meditation hall full
    of disturbances

    ~~~

    high waters
    high moon
    reaching for each other
    Last edited by Martin; 02-20-2012 at 05:36 PM.

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    I like the first haiku because the syllables are 3-4-5. This could be new type of haiku type poetry.

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