Thread: "The Law"- a Haiku

Two beasts bare their fangs
A meal too meager to share
The law absolute



Well there it is my first submission this fourm ever... I just realized I wrote senryu when I met haiku...

I edited your title to relflect haiku, Dreyga, and I liked this very much. Such truth! Well done, love, and welcome to the forums.

Best,
Lisa

Here I am, being picky again.

"Two beasts bear their fangs" Is this meant to read as "bear", as if the beasts carry their fangs around as a matter of course, or "bare", as in skinning back their lips in a gesture of aggression?

This is one of those homonyms that can be somewhat difficult to use properly because in many cases they can be somewhat interchangeable, but I did have to ask.

Good eye, Punnikin. I did mean bare.

It is what it is.

sometimes there can be only one.