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  1. 11-07-2011, 09:07 AM #1
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    senryu of fishes

    beware the codpiece
    bulge too large for its breeches
    may hold red herring
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  2. 11-07-2011, 05:59 PM #2
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    LOL, I'm dying here, oh boy. Excellent, FP, but I think it should be its. Well done!
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  3. 11-07-2011, 07:15 PM #3
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    Lisa,

    You are correct and thank you very much.

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    my experience:
    Sometimes big things can be found
    In small packages
    There's nothing like a simile.
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  5. 11-09-2011, 05:58 AM #5
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    if one wishes sighs
    unwrap packages slowly
    joy needs time to grow
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