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  1. 11-04-2011, 10:36 AM #1
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    Exclamation Senryu of the Centurian

    centurian dismount!
    the call of duty's lathen
    shackle foe off thee!!
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    I wish I could parse this ... I'm sure you have a clear idea of what you mean -- I'm just too dim to discern it.
    There's nothing like a simile.
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    dear astroannie thank you for reading my senryu..
    this about a centurian who is to dismount and unshackle himself free foes and wars.
    his call of duty to go and fight has now come to an end.
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    Do you mean "centurion"?

    I'm not sure what he's "dismounting" here.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ilasir Maroa View Post
    Do you mean "centurion"?

    I'm not sure what he's "dismounting" here.
    hi there

    centurion sorry.
    dismount as in get off the horse?!!
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    Centurions tend to be foot soldiers...
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ilasir Maroa View Post
    Centurions tend to be foot soldiers...
    depends on the centurion's ranking , this type fights on a horse, and they usually practice/lance ''fighting shows''.
    you must have seen the movie 'Centurion'??
    here is a picture:
    Name: centurion-dominic-west1.jpg Views: 26 Size: 73.2 KB
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  8. 11-09-2011, 07:31 AM #8
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    True. I said "tend to be" because that is a more common perception of centurions than those in the legionary cavalry.
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