Thread: senryu of the plum

should the plum wither
fruit untended serves no one
once pruned it moves men

Witty and clever! :} Peace...Jul

Hope this little 'plum in cheek' was taken as humorously as it was meant. Thank you for reading

fp

LOL, this is simply grand. Thanks FP.

very fine read there feralpen...enjoyed a lot!

Chester's Daughter;

Thanks for the great comment. Love your seasonal avatar!

fp

Dear Nacian;

Glad you liked 'plum'. I often like to have a little fun when writing. You've been most tolerant. Thank you.

fp

ROFL! I love how you took this concept and made it work. Great job!

Thank you Annie;

Glad the humor worked for you. I have a lot of FUN writing. I can be serious ... I just avoid it any time that I can.

fp

Simple and beautiful. I wish I could put words together with such ease

This one really ran through me, fp.

ravag3;

Thank you for a very kind comment. Just take up pen and paper and try a couple of these. You never know, they may be much easier for you than they are for me. I am always in doubt that I do them properly.

fp

Gumby;

Then I am relieved by the fruit of my labor.

fp

Wonderful work. I enjoyed it.

Thank you Nellie;

I'm very glad you enjoyed plum and left such a nice comment.

fp