Thread: What'z up?

Glad that you're here Brendan. If you ever need someone to do a critique or just someone to talk to, hit me up.

Alright Sniper, thank you! I appreciate that. I have a piece I'd like you to read up on (if you don't mind!) and comment on. I really would like to know if you like it or not, and why. I've posted my story on quite a lot of forums, and all they really seem to mention is whether they like it or not.

I don't mind if you rip me to pieces - I'll get hurt, but realisation'll come and I'll appreciate it eventually.

Click here for my piece.

*first i'll brush my teeth then i'll turn the kettle on whilst i'm brushing my teeth cuz you know that way i can be doing something instead of just standing there waiting for the kettle to boil. then i'll fill my water bag (the cover is just freshly washed woo!) and go up to bed. i'll probably think to myself at one point "i wonder if jocelyn is online now and i wonder if she'll even get my offline messages?" then i'll most likely play with my willy and think of you tehe *isjk dun wurry*

Greetings.