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Old 03-28-2006, 08:32 PM   #1
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hello this is my first poem "Phase"
hello this is julie i'm new to writing so bare with me. this is the very first poem i have ever written i want to get some opinions.

this poem is called phase

while deeply looking into his eyes i realize this could never be.
but still i have to know could this really be?
is it true or just a phase?


thanks in advance for your opinions.
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Old 03-28-2006, 08:34 PM   #2
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hello and welcome to the boards, good to have you
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Old 03-29-2006, 12:09 AM   #3
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Well welcome to the community! Hope you enjoy it!
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Old 03-29-2006, 12:44 AM   #4
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Welcome to the forums, julie!

I'm not much good at poetry. You should try posting in our poetry forum:
http://www.writingforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=19

You'll get a better response there.
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Old 03-29-2006, 01:31 AM   #5
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Welcome to Writing Forums, Julie!


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Old 03-29-2006, 01:33 AM   #6
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Hey thats a better opening thread then I had. You should find it quite welcoming here.
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