Hey im new to these forums, im 16 years old and have enjoyed writing since i was very young, i am currently working on a book, which is only just over a chapter long so far

i have re-written the first chapter 4 times now, to make it sound how i think it should be. However i know it needs alot of work, and i would appreciate anyone giving me advice and any feedback they can

(it is posted in the fiction section).
I have always liked writing but, Tolkien really inspired me to seriously write, and then reading other authers such as Robin Hobb,Christopher Paolini, Brian jaques and many others, i grew a passion for writing.
Thats about it.
Callum. <(^.^)>
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