indulge in me

Hey my name's lexi, I'm new. And I also found this forum by googling. I come from Ohio. So uh, here I am!

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we were parked out by the tracks
we were sittin' in the back
and we'd just started gettin' busy
when she whispered
"what was that?"
the wind. I think.
cause no one else knows where we are.
and that was when she started screamin
that's my dad outside the car!

--nickleback

bornagainathiest

hey and welcome to the forum

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indulge in me

Thanks. I read your other thread, and I think i'm going to read your piece that was mentioned in there. I also just posted one of mine.

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we were parked out by the tracks
we were sittin' in the back
and we'd just started gettin' busy
when she whispered
"what was that?"
the wind. I think.
cause no one else knows where we are.
and that was when she started screamin
that's my dad outside the car!

--nickleback

indulge in me

Oh my gosh it gave me chills. I loved it, very excellent!

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we were parked out by the tracks
we were sittin' in the back
and we'd just started gettin' busy
when she whispered
"what was that?"
the wind. I think.
cause no one else knows where we are.
and that was when she started screamin
that's my dad outside the car!

--nickleback

Nickie

Hello Lexi, and welcome to the forums!


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Brasstwister

Hello and Welcome !