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Old 11-09-2005, 05:32 AM   #1
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poets...

poets are in touch with universe...

poetry whispers through maidenly veins
offering silence and storm
editing luscious linguistic refrains
touching in value and form…
some of us sense heaven’s lyrical rains
as if being kissed by the skies
reading remembrance in history’s eyes
editing words
in time’s echoing sighs
none of which weigh on their souls…
tenderness lingers and colors their goals
over the shoulders of stars
ultimate phrases
come through without scars
hushing the deepest of pains…
washing away their invisible chains
images sacred, but dark…
twilight keeps showing
her every spark
using but wings and a smile
nothing seems heavy
in comforting arms
veils of forgiveness
equation and charmes
roaming about in the mind
starting new pages of dawning
emotions and thrills of a lovely kind…

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Old 11-09-2005, 05:36 AM   #2
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Tumbleweed, I think you can better place this poem in the appropriate section. This section is just for introducing yourself.


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Old 11-11-2005, 08:14 PM   #3
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Nickie is right please a mod or forum bot move this poem too the poem section. but it is good though.
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