Wow, what a week. T.G.I.S.! ...since our work week ends on Saturday and not Friday.
Anyways, as promised I have attached a sample of my writing. It is the first chapter from both of my novels. The first one finished (but I may re-write), the second one I am struggling with an end.
My hope is that the second has a more mature writing style. I'm no English major, I just try to tell a good story as best I can. So give it a read when you can and let me know what you think....but please be gentle...
That damned Smurfette. She was always prettier than me
. I guess it's the eye in the middle of the forehead thing.
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