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    Ink Blot
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    Another Hello

    Hello. I'm an amateur film and cultural critic with a smallish blog, and I want to improve my writing, but I can't do it on my own. Basically, I'm hoping you can help me, not just by critiquing my submissions but through reviewing and reading others' work. What I write will eventually be posted on my blog, but I do hope to try for professional publication in the future. In case you can't tell, I'm pretty nervous about this but assume I will get over it. Probably.

    Before I post anything (which won't be for a while, of course) I did want to ask: I do occasionally use naughty words in my reviews and essays. Should I edit those out before submitting here?

    Thanks, everyone.

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    Hi Stacia, and welcome to the forums.

    Please see this excerpt from the site rules (top of page) with reference to naughty words.
    Profanity: Within the Poetry and Prose areas, profanity is allowed in the presence of a proper disclaimer and language warning. In posts elsewhere, we request you respect the site's PG13 rating in all posts. We will notify you if the staff are required to remove one of your posts in line with this policy. We regret that repeat offenses can result in the suspension of your WritingForums.com Account.
    Enjoy your time on the site.

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    The sand of the desert is sodden red, -
    Red with the wreck of a square that broke; -
    The Gatling's jammed and the colonel dead,
    And the regiment blind with dust and smoke.
    The river of death has brimmed his banks,
    And England's far, and Honour a name,
    But the voice of schoolboy rallies the ranks,
    "Play up! play up! and play the game!"

    Vitai Lampada (Sir Henry Newbolt, 1897)

    From the Home of Sir Henry Newbolt (a blog)



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    Oops! When I read the rules included when signing up I assumed those at the top of the page were exactly the same so I didn't read them. Thank you for pointing that out for me.

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    Hi there Stacia, and welcome to the forums!

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    Welcome to WF, stacia.
    “The greatest achievement was at first and for a time a dream. The oak sleeps in the acorn, the bird waits in the egg, and in the highest vision of the soul a waking angel stirs. Dreams are the seedlings of realities.” ~ James Allen

    "Use what talents you possess: the woods would be very silent if no birds sang there except those that sang best." ~ Henry Van Dyke


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