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  1. BoredMormon
    BoredMormon
    Post works you want us to look at here.
  2. BoredMormon
    BoredMormon
    Dreams Untitled a great read about terroism.

    Helico Everstil the world rests in the hands of a young serving boy

    DarkDyer Bloodlord a new look at the vampire legend and The Mall some highschoolers get mixed up with a demon

    Crazed Soul Seers, the ancient past comes to life

    And my Waters of Sebus
  3. Dreamworx95
    Dreamworx95
    BORED! NO!!!!

    Lol, thanks for the post, but I really don't want people to read Clover's Curse any more. Such a dumb, shitty peice of work. I appreciate you posting the link for my terrorist story.
  4. BoredMormon
    BoredMormon
    Oops. I edited it out. I'll let people post there own from here. Just thought it a good way to start. That said, I enjoyed clover's curse, silly as it was.
  5. Dreamworx95
    Dreamworx95
    Lol. Sorry for being so rude. Thanks for liking it.
  6. Helicio
    Helicio
    Ha! Thanks Bored Mormon!
  7. DarkDyer
    DarkDyer
    Wow, Bored, well said. Thanks for the post. I still need to read your Waters work. That is my goal for today.

    I actually liked Clover's Curse. I think you could make an amazing story with that guy and his hamster. It was a riot.
  8. BoredMormon
    BoredMormon
    Clover's curse was great. But I think it met the same fate as my first novel attempt. I had no idea where I wanted it to go. It just kept getting more and more complex with no end in sight. Maybe we can convince dream to get back to it in a while. But for now I think a break would do her good. (See, I remembered dreams a girl. I'm not completely useless )
  9. Dreamworx95
    Dreamworx95
    Wow, good job Bored. You deserve an applause. *starts clapping*
  10. BoredMormon
    BoredMormon
    Thank you, thank you very much. *takes a bow*
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