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Old 06-05-2008, 04:06 AM   #1
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tiolet seat reflections and stir of echoes by mikhalt thanks

Toilet seat reflections

when one sits on the can he realises, there are things in this world that cannot
be explained nor fathomed by the end of ones sentence or fragment of one
but one can determine is that the world was created by the a 1st source. adding

to the cause and effect theory. as well if you look at light, which has never been
defined in and of itself. if one had a first source to the light. 1st being light being created
2nd being cause, and the 3rd effect.

toilet seat reflections is one of those things u can really be thankful for in life cuz
hey u aint goin nowhere, and sometimes thats the best place to think up such strange
yet sane things.

now to think also of the fact that E=mc2, where time is the 4th dimension which is curved around
the 3 dimensions that are already in the earth. what of the world outside of ourselves

can science pin point it? how can man fathom what is outside? mass density and volume. ?

is it a who? what when where? how can we see? in north america, in our greek brangelina fested mind

how can we?

where are we going? or are we all going the same sane, partially insane direction.

stir of echoes

the stir of echoes broods inside the disturbed mind like a pair of vipers
eating through the brain like the end of a brocolli infested meal trying
to figure out, why is this eating into my belly

and why this is not making any sense why is it so detestable, yet every part of u wants
to work with it nonetheless, what is this thing, u seek to find, yet have already yet feel so
empty at the same time. stir of echoes, out of the insanity of the human mind is perplexed and
pinned 2 the corner by the very vanity it seeks.

echoes? soul? ja

thanks
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Old 06-06-2008, 05:43 PM   #2
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Stir of echoes was the name of that movie, right?

Also, the grammar murders the piece, along with the fact that it doesn't make sense.
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