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File 13 Got something you were going to throw away, something that just didn't fit or work out the way you planned? Share it here.

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Old 05-29-2008, 08:56 AM   #1
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Old 06-01-2008, 07:07 AM   #2
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I view with distaste the excretions polluting this site, suffering when I read another by-product of the boredom of one with access to a computer and the internet. As I read I feel I am being defecated on, and cling to an idea that one day I may find solace in the words of one who takes pride in their work.
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Not sure about that Ox, don't mind most of it but I would hate to think I put you to sleep.

Damien, this is good, not much of it but it's good, I particularly liked the beeswax voice, it reminded me of long summer afternoons in school, the smell of fresh beeswax, "The drowsy bees suck honey from the blossoms in the trees" and "Bees upon a bank of violets both giving and receiving". When you manage all that with this few words you are cooking on gas mate.
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