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Old 04-24-2008, 01:15 PM   #1
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Old 04-24-2008, 01:17 PM   #2
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Old 04-24-2008, 09:56 PM   #3
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I enjoyed it. You would think that by now people would know you write about men, lol. I always enjoy your writing! And despite what you say you got emotion across very well. Especially Elov's anger. BTW message me when you start threads, I really do love to read what you write.

oh, and if you need inspiration...I'd like to know more about Pasha and....___early relationship.

Oh, and about this one. I think it would benefit from a more definite idea of age differences.
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Old 04-27-2008, 07:11 PM   #4
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It's good, also I think knowing what the relationship between the two is would help.
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Old 05-06-2008, 01:20 PM   #6
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What's the problem? You don't know where to go next? Are you freewriting or do you have the characters developed already? Do they have a character arch? Do you have a plot arch?

The writing is fine, for a first draft, and so I'm not sure what the problem is that you're having.
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Old 05-08-2008, 08:38 AM   #7
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Maybe step back and plot some. Otherwise, as I said, the writing is fine.
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