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Old 02-22-2008, 09:33 PM   #1
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Poem I wrote in seventh grade :P

Depression


Depression is an imaginary place
That welcomes all
But lets no one leaves


Depression is the absence of happiness
A black hole in the heart
The tangled web we weave


Depression is a battle
Played on the landscape of the mind
Of which no one ever wins


Depression is a nuisance
Which grows every moment
Along with all the sins


Depression is a state of mind
That no one ever has escaped
And no one ever will


Depression is a feeling
That darkens every day
Until the soul grows ill.
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Old 02-22-2008, 09:39 PM   #2
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this did not suck. (:
it was as great as unfree air.
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Old 02-22-2008, 09:40 PM   #3
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Unfree air? I don't follow.

Thanks though .
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Old 02-22-2008, 10:27 PM   #4
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i dont get it myself.
sounded like a great thing to put at the time, but i just ened up confusing myself.
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Old 03-08-2008, 01:11 PM   #5
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Thats really good for seventh grade...I remember back then all I wrote about was love lol. I really dig some of the imagery.
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Old 03-08-2008, 05:45 PM   #6
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Not bad! Are you going to try to update it for now? I dug it!
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Old 03-09-2008, 10:53 AM   #7
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I dunno, I haven't really thought about updating it .
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