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Old 11-29-2007, 08:33 AM   #1
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Question Just dosn't seem right

If you guys have any ideas plese help.

This feeling so hollow, im alone. This height shortening so fast. Closer than before. "Please Lord I want your help, I want this to be done, if you want to save me send your angels, if you can give me a meaning with my life, i will live forever by your side, you will be in my thoughts, in my life. I know you wont come, because you do not care. my destiny is only this. To become what im made of. Be remembered for nothing, be missed or cried over by no one. if this is the end so be it.

I feelt nothing. No pain. No suffering. Now i walk the earth once again. but something is different, no hollowness, im not alone anymore.
Only joy fills my heart. As i walk down the street, everything has changed. I can feel my heart again. Screaming with happiness, glad to be back again. Now i know where i need to go. I had a meaning anyway.

I stretched out my feathered wings, I flew so high. passed planes. The may planets i came to the place a mortal man would call sun. This is paradise. so joyfull and filled with laughter.
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