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Zombies (Parts taken out for content)
So I had just read "Max Brooks: Zombie Survival guide" and I was poised to write an epic zombie thriller but, I let it sit for to long and lost what I was oging to do and so it is going to waste. So I want you to have it. The story is at 13 pages so over the next few days I will release it, but I don't want to make a ridiculiously long entry, so here are the first two pages (Explicit content taken out).
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Max sat at the illuminated desk violently __________. He would slow down and speed up to make the feeling last as he scrolled through the pictures of the girls on the screen. There were beads of sweat forming on his forehead that rolled down his contorted face. When the time came he stood up and ____________________________ hit the carpet right by his feet. He gripped the white wall as he panted from a large release as the endorphins hit him.
Max closed the blue laptop and _________ up his pants genteelly making sure not to get anything stuck in the shiny bronze teeth. With a sigh of relief he walked out of his room and joined his roommate in the living room. He walked into the well lit room where his roommate was situated on the leather sofa and he took his place in the bean bag. A steaming cup of tea was waiting for him. Max had a few minutes before he had to get out to Valerie, his friend, and see her. It wasn’t but a week ago when he got the call from the doctor…
Max was, poised, waiting by the auburn telephone on the kitchen counter for Valerie to call. The two of them were supposed to go out and party together that fateful night. He had waited there for two hours with the television as his only company. As he waited he decided to pop in one of his favorite DVD’s and have some fun. Max was in the middle of _____ and was about to finish when both of his neighbors came by. They paused when they heard the moans coming from the T.V., the two girls looked in and saw him with his _________________ in his hands. They didn’t know what to think and so just left with red rosy cheeks.
Max knew them well and wanted desperately to hook up with either one of them. Max relaxed back into the suede leather couch and focused once more on the cold screen, he got up to _____________ when the phone rang. He picked up the receiver as he went to the bathroom and completed what he had started. The news didn’t seem to faze him at all in the least while in the bathroom.
Back in the living room Max sat down in his bean bag and contemplated the news he had just received:
“Hello is this Max?” The voice asked him solemnly.
“Depends, who’s asking.” Max was not in a mood to be bothered.
“This is Jack I'm an EMT, do you know a Valerie?”
“Yeah why”
“She is in a comma…” The EMT seemed to drift away.
“Is she in the ER?”
“No she’s in the hospital, she’s doing fine, considering…”
“What happened?”
“Her dad beat her” There was nothing after that.
“Thank you” Max was stunned.
Ever since that day he had been going to the hospital after class to see her and spend time with her. He used to like her, he would do anything she would say, but now they were just friends. Max always thought that she looked more peaceful in the hospital bed than he had seem her in years. A sever hypochondriac Valerie was very fragile and would worry about everything constantly. Valerie had a tendency to take things too personally and so was very emotional. She made Max her personal shoulder to cry on. Eventually Max was able to tune what ever she said out, she never talked about anyone, or anything, either than herself which was very draining and which made her look ugly, but now she didn’t have to worry about anything like that.
Max walked down the metal stairs, every step echoing as he descended, making his way to the car. He made it to the crumpled piece of red metal and wires that was his car. He always looked forward to the visits with Valerie; he had sex sweat forming on his brow as he thought of the meeting in the near future. the ripped upholstery and cracking black dash didn’t seem to bother him because he was so excited to have a few hours of time by himself with Valerie.
He reached the bleak parking lot and got out of the crumbling car and made his way to the brightly lit building. The hospital seemed to tower over the rest of the city and was a sight to see he walked toward the doors and was flooded with light as the two automatic doors opened. The white walls and shiny floor put a chill up Max’s back, something he didn’t understand what could cause it. He made it to the nurses desk, past all the sick people and doctors, and got a visitors pass to visit Valerie.
In the bleak room Valerie was alone on the white bed in the white gown with a window at the other end of the room so if she did wake up she wouldn’t have anything to look at except for blue skies. Max felt at ease and was very comfortable with what he was about to do. He closed the door behind and made his way to the sick bed where his friend lay helpless, unable to move or struggle. He slowly lifted __________ (You don't wanna know what I wrote here, Man I was in a sick place when I wrote this, I must have been really mad or something)______________.
For many years Max had followed Valerie hoping to someday ____________ with her, but that never happened. The first time he visited her in the hospital there was no attraction to the situation, but when he was leaving he gave her a kiss meant for the cheeks but he- “missed” and kissed her on the lips. The fact that she didn’t slap him turned him on, so from there after he progressively got more physical with her comatose body.
_____(The next paragraph is just too explicit for this forum... Yeah, I know I was sick, I don't write about stuff like this anymore; Murder and gothic themes is what I write about anymore.)________.
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Okay, well I warned you, the rest will be posted over the next few weeks... Sorry that this was so long I know that there are others that want to write stuff here and I am taking up the space so this won't be an everyday thing. Please feel free to yell at me if I missed anything too.
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