Renos Babe

This is a series i began to write in grade 8 and only just dug up.
these are just a few bits and pieces that i had, lying around.

book 5 (Prolouge)
Imagine, you’re a outcast living in the back streets of the last city on earth, A predator cast out of your pack, preying on those who cause others pain. Unable to control a demonic power inside you, which activates at the sight of blood. Just under two years ago, this was me. Until one day by chance, someone found me. A young girl, with mismatched eyes and jet-black hair…Clad entirely in black. She ran into my domain, being chased by a foe I could not yet see. She stoped dead in the centre of my killing ground a gloved hand holding her other arm, which I could not see. She looked at me fear burning in her eyes, as well as confusion. She did not move until she heard the people who had been chasing her enter my grounds; she turned drawing a blade, reviling a bleeding wound to her upper arm. I felt the power surging threw me, and I attacked, after that all I can remember is her voice calling me back to my senses…I am Shanther, the fifth member of the Midas Hierarchy.

book 6(Prolouge)
What if someone was destroying the one thing you loved and there was nothing you could do about it how would you feel? The Hierarchy is trapped, Tenchi has Wolfkin in his hands, and the hands of his soldiers, and I am powerless to do anything about it. What is a man to do when the girl he loves is being…I cannot even write it down…this is the sixth Hierarchy Chronicle.
Nayr.

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Emerson Darkness

Not bad. Not bad at all.
I have demonic power that
activates at the sight of blood.

...They call it passing out.

Yeah, it's not a great secret to divulge, but...there you have it!

I'll encourage you to develope this. You've got quite the imagination.

Renos Babe

thanks...it was acctually me and a group of friends...we all have different strength when it comes to this kind of stuff...

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variousitems

Where did you come up with the name "Midas Hierarchy"?

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Renos Babe

well its a long story, cause one of the people helping me with it came up with it

Midas is as in the guy with the golden Touch and because they are first and formost a bounty hunting team it kinda fitted, because they are all working for money, and its the name of the orgainisation. Hirearchy as you proberly know is Ranking so well yeah and it sounded all right, i'll try and get the better version of how so you can actually understand

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variousitems

Sound like a cool idea.

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History will be kind to me for I intend to write it.
-Sir Winston Churchill

Renos Babe

Well, Midas was a king in an ancient legend that gained the power which made everything he touched into gold. As everyone tends to associate the Sun with gold, that was the first part. This also eventually became the name of Wolfkin's race (Midassien or somethin like dat i can't remember now). Hierachy came about when we were trying to think of something to place on the end of Midas that was different but still implied that it was an organisation. Midas -> Gold -> Sun -> Wolfkin's home. Hierachy -> level of rank -> organisation ->assassination business. Therefore, Midas Hierachy.

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Arclight

I agree you should carry on with this, or at least build on the same foundations.

Renos Babe

Thanks i proberly will now

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