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Old 07-27-2006, 08:48 PM   #1
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My failed poem of contradictions!

The bee buzzes along silently,
And lands in the busy, lazy hive,
He crash-lands softly, he's on a cool fire,
This modest working bee wants to 'bee' hired.

The queen alertly sluggishly raised her head,
And the bee yells quietly that he wants a job,
The queen generously declines,
And the bee makes a slow bee-line!



Man, there's so much wrong with that....
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Old 07-29-2006, 01:35 PM   #2
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This poor bee bee-longs in Alice in Wonderland.
Does the bee come down with a bad case of the hives in the next part??
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