shinbook

While standing in a spot at a very public place
to acquiesce the urge of urination
I spied common logic in front of my face.
Tried to analyze, in deep contemplation

"Fuck Bush" was one strong statement that I read
Also I learned that John and David were queer
Leslie was a whore, they all gave good head
Many more, each lifestyle made clear

"Fuck these ole fuckers all over this school"
Statement of defiance lacking intelligence
Of course I can’t forget the immortal “I rule”
Under the pressure, I fear compliance.

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ConorMB

fucking nice man, very true.
Cheers
Conor

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"Bottle After Bottle, Round After Round, I Dont Know About You All, But I'll Never Hit The Ground!"

Current Project: The Compound
Genre: Crime Fiction
Think: Sin City/ Godfather
Progress: Chapter One
Link http://www.writingforums.com/showthread.php?t=63118

Sock

lol, great. Reminds me of one of Dane Cooks Comedy acts.

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elibats

poems that can rhyme and still be meaningful always resonate with me.

my favorites:

and
I think you've really got something here. Definitely doesn't belong in the throwaway pile, at least in my book.

FollowingShadow

Good message. But the meter sounded forced, and I've never had to acquiesce my bowels.