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Old 04-16-2006, 09:06 PM   #1
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I had originally planned on writing a large, epic end-of-the-world story, but quickly found it boring, with too long an intro, and confusing. At thirty pages, it was a shame, but I tossed it.
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Hmm...well, do you still have it? It may yet be salvageable! Let me know what happens.
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Old 04-18-2006, 05:04 PM   #3
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Oh what the hey, I'll post up a rewrite. Tell me how you like it.
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