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| File 13 Got something you were going to throw away, something that just didn't fit or work out the way you planned? Share it here. |
03-22-2006, 07:48 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2006
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Louise all over?
3I wrote this when i was listening to music, and Louise by Clan of Xymox came on, and then i realised i had about 12 songs named Louise, i really dont know why. Didint turn out great though, so ill put it here i guess... 
Louise
Louise – with you I swim,
Naked
In an ever flowing torrent of memories
Louise I need your eyes
For swimming and
Your ayes
For living
With myself; the world is whole
And dreary
Your iridescent soul wipes away the lackluster of society forever
Louise where did you go?
Louise you are the battery which
Drives,
My,
beings,
grandfather,
clock.
Lousie let me link
Lazily lounging arms
Lying by you
I lament
The little of life that lacks
Louise.
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03-27-2006, 03:09 PM
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Profound Writer
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: San Antonio, TX
Gender: Male
Posts: 1,164
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Crap. Crap,crap,crap,crap. CRAP. *For those of you who take offense at this severe breach of manners, I apologize.*
Crapppity, crap crap!
By the way, crap.  |
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03-27-2006, 09:24 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2006
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lol thanks for the constructive criticism, but yeah, its in here cause its crap 3 |
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