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Old 09-10-2005, 03:16 PM   #1
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Somthing I Made Which Is Random

The Blindness Of The Humanity

Humans are so blind, they see so much yet understand so little, thus playing a cruel trick on those can truly see. For as everyone around them adopts an idealisim, or a point of view, those who understand and wish to continue to understand must never take a point of view. They must spread themselves about the world, seeing and seeing because, although it is no difficult skill to teach someone who is blind to see, the blind destroy any chance of their future sight by securing their eyes to firmly within their head, and thus there are that many fewer who can see.

However, that cruel trick is nowhere near as cruel a trick as the blind play on themselves. For, as an idealisim leads the blind, farther and farther down its path, the blind begin to consider themselves less and less sightless, eventually bringing them into a deep and dark cavern of fabricated entirely by the mind. Making the blind simply, more and more confused until they become archon of self deception.

And thats about it, because its really that simple, and all this is, is a little creation and arrangment of words to explain a set of values.
The End.

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Old 09-10-2005, 09:42 PM   #2
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This sounds like it could be developed into something. remember being told your story had to have a theme? I always thought such comments were foolish, but you are sitting on a theme, why not develope it?
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Old 09-11-2005, 05:38 PM   #3
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I Personally Thought it Was Themeless. Somthing more like a brain fart. I also feel that if it were a story, it would end up somthing like angels and demons but with a less capturing story line and worse writing.
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