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Old 07-25-2005, 04:30 PM   #1
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2 Stories I worked on, but they ended up being a File 13....

I was in 7th grade when I decided that I should be a writer. So I got a notebook I had from 6th grade (wasn't in perfect condition of course" and started to write in it. Here's the plot from that one:

It was about a girl who loved dragons. Everything she read or watched had to have a dragon in it, but she was unaware that this came from something inside her. The girl, Laura, was actually one of the 9 reincarnations of these holy dragon warriors from another demension. She found this out when talking to some guy online and ended up in this other world. She was the last to be found of the 9 dragon warriors and met all of the others after some explaining was done. Laura had to travel with the others to a dangerous part of this world that held the "Prophecies of the World" that fortold their future and destinies. They needed to get there to protect this world from an ancient danger that kill them in several past lives, but luckily for them they could change into their dragon lives at a moment's notice to fend for themselves.

Hey, I know. It was a story for little kids, and that's what it started out as. I might change it because I like writing stories for teens much more because I can do many more things with them.

EDIT: Oops.. I forgot to put down my other File 13 story. Heh-heh silly me >.<

Well the other one was a sci-fi love story (yet another one with teen romance that would end tragically... I like drama too much)

This one was about a war happening far, far, into the future. This is an old war going on for a very long time between these two races. It started after world peace was acheived on earth, but the peace did not last long. A new race of creatures was found living on an artificial planet. Not aliens, (I don't like alien stories much) but an entirely other race. From apperance they looked like humans, only two qualities were different. They had eyes much wider and larger than normal humans (not alien eyes) and they're ears were these large metal receptors. They were able to do many more things than the humans and found humans to be in their way of gathering resorces, or so that's what it seemed to be about on the outside.

A human girl trapped in the middle of war was one of the very few survivors when this new race, The Gasoeh, destroys earth. Here rescuer was a young solider only a year older than her who an outcast as well, being a halfling. His mother was a human and father a Gasoeh. He was orphaned as well an didn't do to well with his popularity because of this. The war seems to go on pause and the Human girl, who is suffering from amnesia, must adapt to Gasoeh life on the aritifical planet.


She meets Jiro, a rebelious but comical boy, who helps her through a lot. She ends up loving Jiro and fails to realize that her rescuer, who lives in the same apartment area as she does, has a huge crush on her. But before long another war breaks out over something the Gasoeh have done, breaking a treaty with other races from other planets, and war breaks out again. The Gasoeh soliders must return to the space station where the military stays and since Tamru, the solider who rescued the girl, is still incharge of the human survior she must go as well. To stay with his girl, Jiro joins the military in the junior division squad (15+) with Tamru. War bursts out as well as jealousy between the two over the human girl, but unknown to them her amnesia may be the key to the past of the mysterious Gasoeh race and to the death of Tamru's parents.
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Sounds cool. I like the idea for both of them. Now if you could only come up with the time to write them.
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Old 07-28-2005, 05:37 PM   #3
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Oh I started to write them both, but they were in notebooks and they fell apart T_T I still have them but they'll get worse if I touch them.
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I highly doubt it. That is the case for two of my stories though.
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Why do you highly doubt that? The dragon one was a notebook from the 6th grade (I'm in tenth now) that died last school year. Not to mention that 6th grade was the worse grade to have a notebook from in my case. When I got a new one it wasn't a hard cover, you know, one of those paper ones. And my back pack eats books apparently because after two months both covers fell over and the pages got tattered. I could still write in it but it requires too much revising.
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Old 08-31-2005, 09:24 PM   #6
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That's how my backpack is too. It eats papers, but my note books fell apart because I carried them by hand. ( I've found papers in my old backpack from the beginning of the year last year, and they were so crushed they were the length of my thumb long ways on the paper) I'm a sophmore too and my fallen apart notebooks are from last year.
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I'm a sophmore too! Starting tomorrow anyway. My backpack does the same thing...
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That's cool. Why have you cycled through so many Naruto avatars? They all look cool. Sorry I'm drunk from endorphins. (I never thought I would be able to spell that word right)
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