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Old 02-28-2005, 06:14 PM   #1
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cease turning my green to grey
with wilful acts of nature
your heart is found in theirs
providing for the urgency
to lose love's indifference,
redeem that part of self
that feels only for you



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wow, that hit me when I wasn't expecting it. especially the third and fourth lines. nice word choice, it really struck a chord.
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