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| File 13 Got something you were going to throw away, something that just didn't fit or work out the way you planned? Share it here. |
02-08-2005, 10:21 AM
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Hypnocat
My hypnotic mesmerism cat
Your eyes are red
Blood dripping
From of your whiskers
Purr and talk in equal measure
Nice shoes but we
Have no need for
All the words that the cat need say
(I couldn't take it any further)
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02-15-2005, 12:57 PM
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That was interesting. I'm not totally clear what you were getting at but, unique for sure.
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02-26-2005, 11:57 PM
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its about 1 am, ive been listening to blinded by the light for the last 2 hours on repeat, and im sorry if you werent going for this, but your poem made me laugh.
i loved it.
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02-27-2005, 12:01 AM
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That was...somewhat unsettling.
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02-27-2005, 01:31 AM
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Inspiration:
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03-10-2005, 06:47 AM
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Interesting inspiration. Shows that it's possible to get inspired by the strangest things.
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03-10-2005, 11:06 AM
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That is one creepy cat. I'll have nightmares about red cats with red eyes tonight.  |
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03-11-2005, 06:30 AM
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Perhaps this is what you were going for, but this poem feels stilted and awkward to me.
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03-11-2005, 06:48 AM
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stilted, no
awkward, yes!
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