Writers Forum - WritingForums.com Home Rules FAQ Members Groups Calendar Gallery Search
» Sign Up «

Welcome to Writing Forums, one of the fastest growing writing communties on the web.

You are currently viewing our boards as a guest which gives you limited access to view most discussions, articles and photo galleries. By joining our free community you will be able to talk with other writers, get feedback on your work to improve your writing skills, discuss ideas, share tips & tricks, network and make friends!

Registration is fast, simple and absolutely free so please, join our community today!

If you have any problems with the registration process or your account login, please contact support.
  Search Forums
Lit.Org - Bootcamp for writers. Post your work and other writers review it, it's that easy.

Advanced Search



Go Back   Writers Forum - WritingForums.com > Creativity > File 13
Register FAQ Members List Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

File 13 Got something you were going to throw away, something that just didn't fit or work out the way you planned? Share it here.

Reply
 
Thread Tools
Old 02-05-2005, 04:50 PM   #1
Addict
 
Join Date: Jan 2005
Gender: Private
Posts: 104
galrium
I found this on one of my old sites...

Yeah, so I was going through the HTML of my old sites and I found this on one of the discarded pages:

-------

"You know," Billy Cutherson told his best friend, "I'm sure gonna miss that place. It might have been the worst thing in my life, but I guess it was the worst too. Get what I mean?"
Venna Michaels, known as V.V., smiled faintly. "Yeah, I guess so. I don't remember ever living anywhere else. Probably because I haven't." She grinned and looked over at Billy.
Billy's eyes twinkled back before they settled with looking out the back window. Together they watched the orphanage that had once been their home disappear beyond the hill they were now driving down. They watched as the building that held all their memories be put into the past; they watched as the place where they'd become best friends fade away.

-------

I never quite finished it. Which is obvious... lol.

Any comments? (heh, I wrote this when I was 12... weird, huh?)
__________________
"OooOOOooh, my dearie, my luv- CAKE!!"
I have no idea where this came from, but all I know is that I couldn't have made it up, even though it came into my head with no other thought. Thanks, whoever wrote this first!
Something to do with HP slash...
galrium is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 02-05-2005, 10:02 PM   #2
Adept Writer
 
Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: Colorado
Gender: Male
Posts: 928
cyberspecter is an unknown quantity at this point
Re: I found this on one of my old sites...

Quote:
Originally Posted by galrium
Yeah, so I was going through the HTML of my old sites and I found this on one of the discarded pages:

-------

"You know," Billy Cutherson told his best friend, "I'm sure gonna miss that place. It might have been the worst thing in my life, but I guess it was the worst too. Get what I mean?"
Venna Michaels, known as V.V., smiled faintly. "Yeah, I guess so. I don't remember ever living anywhere else. Probably because I haven't." She grinned and looked over at Billy.
Billy's eyes twinkled back before they settled with looking out the back window. Together they watched the orphanage that had once been their home disappear beyond the hill they were now driving down. They watched as the building that held all their memories be put into the past; they watched as the place where they'd become best friends fade away.

-------

I never quite finished it. Which is obvious... lol.

Any comments? (heh, I wrote this when I was 12... weird, huh?)
It's not terrible. It needs to be cleaned up and all, but the grain of a good idea is there. Run with it!
cyberspecter is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 02-06-2005, 04:28 AM   #3
Profound Writer
 
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: England
Gender: Female
Posts: 1,236
Scratches
Send a message via MSN to Scratches
Requires formatting and some interesting imagery, but there's a good idea at the centre.
__________________

Never get so attached to a poem
you forget truth that lacks lyricism
and never draw so close to the heat
that you forget that you must eat
- En Gallop, Joanna Newsom
Scratches is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-17-2005, 03:23 PM   #4
Addict
 
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Hiding in your closet.
Posts: 101
grapefruit shall rule O_o
Send a message via AIM to grapefruit shall rule O_o
Re: I found this on one of my old sites...

Quote:
Originally Posted by galrium
Any comments? (heh, I wrote this when I was 12... weird, huh?)
Not weird. WOW.
__________________
NERD UPRISING!!!!!!!! Popular supermodels: Your in-style, trendy socks have been pwned.

Leader/Dictator of the Social Reject Uprising

PM me to join
grapefruit shall rule O_o is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply


Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 
Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are Off
Refbacks are Off


All times are GMT -5. The time now is 11:19 PM.
Powered by vBulletin, Copyright ©2000-2007, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
LinkBacks Enabled by vBSEO 3.1.0


 
You are NOT Logged In.
User Name:

Password



Newsletter

Subscribe to Majestic
the official newsletter of Writing Forums and lit.org
Email:


Related Links

Link to Us:
Writing Forums - Discussions for Writers