Pawn

This a socio-political commentary I recently penned. It poetically draws on a number of profound fundamentals to which my generation is profoundly sensitized. Especially referenced in this work is the early 20th Century artistic movement of the Cubists, quasi-Descartian pro-quietist writings and contemporary musical esotericism. The piece would be best described as a complex divergent of theistic existentialism conflicting with a post-9/11 social climactic.

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why are you such a stupid head,
i wish you were dead.

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FoggyImagination

HA HA HA....you're great.

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Rustem

All this needs is a good 'poopie' somewhere, and itd be complete.

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Nope, that would take away from its seriousness.

Great peice Pawn if I think this is good enough to get published, very easy to read, and you can realy feel and relate to the main charater. There are a few grammer errors I noticed, no big but to the watchful eye I guess it would ruin the flow a bit. You for got to capitalize right here
In the frist sentence you should capitalize the word 'We'

and right here
Part of the last sentence, you missed capitalizing 'I'

but seiously besides that great work. I can't see any reason you couldn't get it published an out there.

keep up the good work man;
you've made a life long fan.

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